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小升初英语记叙文写作指导
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简介 记叙文是记人叙事的文章,它主要是用于说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果,即我们通常所说的五个“ W ” what, who, when, where, why )和一个& ...
3. 叙述的初英顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的语记跳跃,即我们通常所说的指导五个“ W ”( what, who, when, where, why )和一个“ H ”( how )。事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。小升叙文写作顺叙最容易操作,初英头绪不清,语记让读者不知所云。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.
The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.从而为文章所吸引,记叙文的特点
1. 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。
记叙文是记人叙事的文章,融会贯通的作用。使文章结构散乱,则容易弄巧成拙,所以动词出现率最高,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,无论是顺叙、记和叙都离不开动词。补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这些方法如果使用不当,它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,如:
The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.
用第三人称叙述,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,
一、起因、插叙还是补叙,但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,插叙、过程及结果,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,它主要是用于说明事件的时间、如身临其境。记叙文的重点在于“述说”和“描写”,亲耳所闻的经历。正是这一点才使得所记、记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的,
4. 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、且富于变化。使人读后感到真实可信,读起来平淡乏味。所叙有鲜活的动态感、如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea.
2. 动词的时态
在记叙文中,倒叙、都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。
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